Sunday 14 November 2010

Feedback from pitch

The elements that work are:
  • the idea of colour jataration but i would make the artist black and white
  • good locations for music video
  • clever idea of the black and white
  • the whole idea and concept is solid and structured
  • the beach scene idea

The elements that need developing are:

  • consider how the video will appeal to your target audience
  • instead of a blazer for the artist-a leather jacket
  • how doing the crowded area... take will have to be the same
  • effect on the music video

Things that dont work are:

(none)

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